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[历史古香] 【牝侠曲】（王朝的女侠完全重置版）第一章至第八章 四万字更新

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2021-8-18 13:37  显示全部帖子
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重写后可能是刚刚开章把还是很乱，主角的戏份不多，作者大大可以多写一些主角的视角跳来跳去感觉不连贯。感觉肉的部分还没看爽就又跑了。文风有点像白玉道。加油！
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